Here's an earlier version of the poem. I can't seem to decide which I like better. Anyone have an opinion?
Pollen blows. Towhees sing.
A hawk's driven off the branch
By a mourning dove
Calling.
A writer's notebook. I plan to post whatever thoughts come to mind that seem worth sharing. I welcome discussion with anyone who drops by.
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A recent teacher encourage me to create poems and songs that had only 10 syllables. Here is my first one:
ReplyDeleteTime in the forest
Alone
I miss you.
Try it!